Can you give me some feedback on this story? And no rude comments plz!?

I enjoyed it as far as it went. The story seems very real as in it is happening exactly that way. There is a good sensual tension about just what they will or will not do next. The dialogue is easy to follow and interesting as well as it contributes to that what-will-happen suspense. Like very much to know what happens next and next, so email me. Cheers.